Soku's Revenge Against Me : 04

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normalman
9th Apr 2010, 11:34 AM

Another guest page from my roommate, Alex Shaw! This one has been my favorite so far. It has a really cool layout. Could make a cool comic book cover! Alex's version of cyborg-zombie-Soku is pretty awesome, so it's a shame she'll be butchered horribly in a page or two. *sigh* Here's Alex's comments!

"Page 4: Let’s play, Vash.

When I drew this part, I had originally planned for a huge battle. Not that there isn’t one! Just wait, it’s totally sweet and there’s lots of flips and shit. The sword is glowing with power, as swords do. As for the close-ups on Suko’s more appreciable bits, well – I had finally managed to draw a semi-attractive woman, which is an extremely rare event for me, and I wasn’t going to let it go to waste. Enjoy some T&A and some poppin’ lip gloss. I do like Vash’s little angry pointing circle up there. It’s very Archie."

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Cornwiggle
9th Apr 2010, 2:04 PM

Eh, I don't really like this page.

Did the guy drawing this not read that one paragraph of what he was drawing?

It was funnier in word form; she just appears, cries, and he apologizes.

This seems like it has actual buildup... which the original has nothing of.

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???
28th Apr 2010, 6:02 AM

Actually, you read it wrong. He apologized to the KIDS and they cried, not Suko. There's no actual description of the fight scene between Bladevash and Suko, it literally just says she appeared and he killed her.

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Cornwiggle
8th Jun 2010, 4:03 PM

Yeah, I found that out when I read the next page.

Humber's writing is so bad, it's nearly impossible to understand what he means.

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Tyfus
6th Dec 2010, 10:49 AM

Ya know, honestly, she's prolly the perfect woman for Vash. He would need a corpse cuz no other woman could love him right.

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